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Shiny Swadloon by Operia

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Hi! I'm here to critique this, so here I go...
Vision: 4.5/5
I really like the vision, it's subtle and clear, but the lines are out of shape. (The leaves are rounded more.) Although, that barely effects it, I suggest trying to use the curve tool more often.

Originality: 5/5
This is a very unique image. Not many people consider animating in this style, and of a creature (although simple) needs all parts just right so you know what it is.

Technique: 4/5
Yes, the technique is very seeable. I agree with a simple technique as this to help make animations like this, but it would be better with a faster speed (maybe 0.5 faster?)

Impact: 4.5/5
I'm unsure of impact, but if you mean the feelings of this picture, I'd say it is very nice. It actually adds to my liking of your art.

Altogether, this art is VERY enjoyable. I also like your type of style to the shading, as it remind me of some very nostalgic games.

~ Blossom-Forth
The Artist thought this was FAIR
3 out of 3 deviants thought this was fair.

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EllyCoo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Are the people who think "FAIR" with the critique or the art?
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oeur Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Depends. Fair, determines the thought if you think the critique was good and suitable. Or, you can think it fair if you like the art, but mostly on the critique.
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Operia Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the critique :D
Unfortunately, the animation can't go any faster; I already set it to the fastest loop speed.
Other than that, it was all very useful :)
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oeur Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Oh, it can't? Bit sad (I furthermore suggest maybe using one or two less frames?)
And it was useful? Wow! I'm not really good at critiques. Maybe I should critique more! :D
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Operia Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Taking out frames would make the animation more jumpy, but I could try
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